RKO93
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 |  Subject: Jose Montoya's night out  Fri Dec 26, 2008 11:58 am | |
| A camera cuts to show Jose Montoya walking the streets of an urban city. Jose is clad in black skinny jeans, a Puerto Rico T-Shirt, DC Sneakers, and an ADIDAS jacket. Jose stops at what appears to be a night club called "The Rain Forest." There is a large poster up that reads "Ladies Night!!! All females get in for free before 11!" Jose Montoya walks up to the front of the line and slips the bouncer a Benjamin and the bouncer lets him in without question as the entire line begins whining about this. Jose Montoya walks in and notices that the place is full of beautiful women and desperate nerds. Jose Montoya walks straight toward the bar.
Jose Montoya - Hey guy, let me get a glass of Budweiser.
Bartender - Anything else?
Jose Montoya - Nah, just that for now.
Jose Montoya sits at the bar counter scoping out the females in the club as he waits for his beverage. Jose Montoya hears a feminine voice behind him.
Female - Hey buddy, aren't you that sexy Jose Montoya from Exile?
Jose Montoya begins to turn around.
Jose Montoya - Why yes I am..AHH!!!
The female voice is coming from a big hairy transvestite.
Transvestite - What do you say you take me home tonight?
Jose Montoya - I say that only Cody Sexthy would accept that offer! Get the hell out of my face, man-woman!
Transvestite - God, you're just like the rest of them!
The tranvestite begins to cry as she/he runs off. The bartender is chuckling when he brings Jose his drink.
Jose Montoya - What's so funny, buddy?
Bartender - Oh nothing...just be careful about who you talk to in this club. There are alot of shady and colorful characters here.
Jose Montoya - Yea, yea thanks for the heads up.
Jose Montoya grabs his glass mug and takes a sip from it as he leans back onto the counter and looks out for his next bedroom prey.
Jose Montoya - There are just way too many horny bastards here. I'll never get my mack on with all of these guys...oh look, there's Cody Sexthy![/cyan]
Cody Sexthy is seen chasing around a group of girls with a video camera. He's repeatedly getting slapped, but still attempting to get peaks under the group's skirts.
[color=cyan]Jose Montoya - What a loser. I hope that the bouncer roughs him up a little, maybe then he'll calm his hormones. Better yet, maybe I'll just go over and do it.
Jose Montoya grabs his beer and walks over to the group of females being harassed.
Jose Montoya - Excuse me, ladies, but is this abrasive pervert bothering you?
Females simultaneously - Yes!!!
Jose Montoya - Would you like me to take care of him?
Females simultaneously - Yes, please!
Jose Montoya immediately grabs Cody Sexthy by the neck and throws his camcorder across the club, hitting a bystander in the side of the head.
Jose Montoya - Now listen to me, you sick freak!
Cody Sexthy - Hey!!! That was my camcorder!!! I got that for Christmas! I already had hours of great booty footage!
Jose Montoya - Well now it's gone!
Cody Sexthy - Who are you anyways!? You should know that I can probably kick your ass in a milisecond.
Jose Montoya - I'm Jose Montoya.
Cody Sexthy - Who?
Jose Montoya - JOSE MONTOYA! What the hell!? I work for the same company as you! CGS: Exile!
Cody Sexthy - Oh, yea...you're that hispanic guy that never wins.
Jose Montoya - Shut the...I just haven't won because they're not putting me up against losers like you. I would crush you. Now listen up very close, you're going to leave these nice ladies alone. You are going to leave this club before the bouncer has to escort you out. And when Adrenaline comes on Tuesday, you'll be receiving a nice friendly visit from Jose Montoya. Oh, and don't worry. I'll have the ambulance on stand-by.
Jose Montoya releases his grip and tosses Cody Sexthy to the side. Cody Sexthy recollects himself and scurries to the exit.
Jose Montoya - Now who wants to dance?
Three fine females walk out from the group as rave music begins playing and they all start dancing with Jose Montoya. One female is a tall red head, who looks very similar to Brooke Adams. Another female looks similar to Vanessa Hudgens. The final female looks like Jessica Alba. They all dance for about 5 minutes before Jose Montoya's call phone begins ringing. The ringtone is "In Too Deep" by Sum 41, so he knows it's Jimmy DeMarco.
Jose Montoya - Excuse me ladies, I have to take this.
Jose Montoya takes the cell phone from his pocket and walks into the bathroom to answer the phone.
Jose Montoya - Hello?
Jimmy DeMarco - Hey. I heard what just happened between you and Cody Sexthy. Now, I know that you aren't that high up the ranks yet and that he's one of Adrenaline's top stars, but I had an epiphany just seconds ago. Seeing as how you've been wanting to change, I'll see if this entire process has worked for you when you take on Cody Sexthy on Adrenaline.
Jose Montoya - Sweet! Thanks, boss! I won't let you down!
Jimmy DeMarco - I wasn't done yet. Never cut me off, bud. Along with Cody Sexthy, you'll also be taking on the CGS World Champion The Bandit and Michael Cash in a Fatal Four Way contest. I'm putting alot of faith into you in this contest, so PLEASE, don't let me down. I expect a 5 star showing from you, Mr. Montoya.
Jose Montoya - This is absolutely fantastic news, Mr. DeMarco! And when I'm done with those jabronies, you can make me the #1 Contender to the World Title and then I can carry Adrenaline on my back for years to come. I need to call my mom! Thanks so much! See you later.
Jose Montoya presses the red "End" button on his cell phone and calls his mom.
Jose Montoya - Hey mom! Guess what just happened to me....
The voice and screen begin to fade out and then the camera cuts to the Exile arena.
END RP
Last edited by RKO93 on Fri Dec 26, 2008 12:04 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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| | Subject: Re: Jose Montoya's night out Fri Dec 26, 2008 12:02 pm | |
| Nice RP... but you can't use characters like Cody Sexthy and Jimmy DeMarco. You have to put "TBC" for them to reply themselves or seek their permission first, and even then, we prefer it you don't as it takes more skill not to just run through coversations with characters. You ain't got my permission to use DeMarco. So yeah, I don't know what Sykesy will do with this RP, whether it will count to the match. I'd reccomend it counting somewhat as it's of a high quality and there isn't much using of other characters. Oh and it's Michael not Chris Cash. | |
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